Panic, All gone

All Gone.. All Silent..

(Zeal writes an interesting poem.)

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Doorbell ringing,
Heart beating,
Panic!
Terror!
Nothing working.
Running late,
Heart still beating,
Clock still ticking,
tick-tick-tick.
Hearing the stillness
of the stranger.
A tear drop,
Landing on my heart.
All gone.
All silent.

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13 responses to “All Gone.. All Silent..”

  1. Zeal Avatar
    Zeal

    This poem is written by me.Please comment on it!

  2. disha Avatar
    disha

    lovely poem, Zeal! KEEP IT UP:)

  3. Arusha Avatar
    Arusha

    Wow really nice poem!i noticed that you kept your word by writing more!THANK YOU,IT WAS FANTASTIC!please keep writing,and I’m one of your fans! :) ;) :D

  4. Zeal Avatar
    Zeal

    Oh thank you so much Arusha! I finally have a fan club ;)
    And thanks again for commenting on my poem.

    waiting for your wonderful reply….

    ZEAL

  5. kaavya singhal Avatar
    kaavya singhal

    You have a written a great piece of work!!!

  6. Zeal Avatar
    Zeal

    Thank you so much Kaavya!! Even your a great writer,I have read your GUJRATI article also!! :) ;)

  7. Prarthana Avatar
    Prarthana

    amazing poem zeal! i think you should become a poet when u grow up.u will certainly become famous!

  8. Zeal Avatar
    Zeal

    Thank you so much!! I like poetry and will certainly keep my interest in poetry FOREVER. I learn poetry at my school and I also learn FRENCH.

    Thanks again,
    ZEAL

  9. esha Avatar
    esha

    So good. I can’t wait for your next poem.

  10. Arusha Avatar
    Arusha

    I can’t wait for her next one either and I hope it is a story!

  11. manjula26 Avatar
    manjula26

    You write poems like your grandma! very nice! Even i used to write poems like these when i was your age Zeal, hope to get wonderful pieces of work like these!

    take care and pleae keep emailing me Zeal,

    your lovely grandma

  12. Zeal Avatar
    Zeal

    Thank u grandma and I am soon coming to visit you! Yay! I am excited and will certainly keep emailing you.

    Lots of love

    Your grand daughter,
    ZEAL

  13. shashwat Avatar
    shashwat

    Keep it up zeal. Amazing poem!!!! :D

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