( Ayesha, 8, writes a lovely poem on water, the most important thing on Earth)
Water you are so nice as you become ice,
You drip from high places as you say goodbye,
You have different forms as you become warm,
I like you so much as you quench our thirst and fill up our stomach.
You water a lot of woods as you are so good!
You give birth to the roots as I splash you with my boots,
You grow plants into trees, as you fill many seas.
Water is something we should not waste, don’t let run out in a haste!
YOU HAVE WRITTEN A EXCELLENT POEM AND THIS SHOWS THAT HOW SOMETHING BOTHERED YOU AND YOU MADE A SOLUTION. KEEP IT UP !!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovely poem and wonderful thought Ayesha. Keep writing to express your views and feeling..
Amazing Ayesha…Keep it up!!!!
WOW that was really good!
Lovely poem Ayesha : ) Water is also very important for our health .. very important not to waste it . Very well said !!
Very nice thoughts. … keep it up my little angel. :)
Nice poem Ayesha!
You have written an awesommmmme poem that isn’t rhyming BUT spreads a very true and required message to the world
Keep up the good – message spreading duty AND keep up the good writing