(Shash , 11, imagines what it is like to be a free bird.)
If I were a bird,
I’d fly up in the sky,
Chattering and tweeting,
In a pitch so high!
If I were a bird,
I’d be a bluebird or magpie,
Robin or crow,
It doesn’t matter to me,
Because I’d still be a bird,
…Wouldn’t I?!
Sweet poem! ;) I enjoyed reading it.
You have used good rhyming words and vocabulary.
I especially like your ending! WELL DONE! ;) :)
Keep writing these amazing poems and post them on kinooze PLEASE! ;)
Zeal
Excellently excellent!i loved it and I agree with zeal that you have used good rhyming words and vocabulary!
Thanks for agreeing with me Arusha!
Your most welcome!
Thanks guys.
Your most welcome!!!!!!!