(Zeal writes an interesting poem.)
Doorbell ringing,
Heart beating,
Panic!
Terror!
Nothing working.
Running late,
Heart still beating,
Clock still ticking,
tick-tick-tick.
Hearing the stillness
of the stranger.
A tear drop,
Landing on my heart.
All gone.
All silent.
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This poem is written by me.Please comment on it!
lovely poem, Zeal! KEEP IT UP:)
Wow really nice poem!i noticed that you kept your word by writing more!THANK YOU,IT WAS FANTASTIC!please keep writing,and I’m one of your fans! :) ;) :D
Oh thank you so much Arusha! I finally have a fan club ;)
And thanks again for commenting on my poem.
waiting for your wonderful reply….
ZEAL
You have a written a great piece of work!!!
Thank you so much Kaavya!! Even your a great writer,I have read your GUJRATI article also!! :) ;)
amazing poem zeal! i think you should become a poet when u grow up.u will certainly become famous!
Thank you so much!! I like poetry and will certainly keep my interest in poetry FOREVER. I learn poetry at my school and I also learn FRENCH.
Thanks again,
ZEAL
So good. I can’t wait for your next poem.
I can’t wait for her next one either and I hope it is a story!
You write poems like your grandma! very nice! Even i used to write poems like these when i was your age Zeal, hope to get wonderful pieces of work like these!
take care and pleae keep emailing me Zeal,
your lovely grandma
Thank u grandma and I am soon coming to visit you! Yay! I am excited and will certainly keep emailing you.
Lots of love
Your grand daughter,
ZEAL
Keep it up zeal. Amazing poem!!!! :D
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