(Reina, 9, writes a wishful poem for a dream land where everyone is happy.)
I want a dream land
Of my own choices
The things all magical
With fewer voices.A colourful palace
With me on the throne
Who ever comes becomes a fairy or pixie
Every one’s together and no one alone.I’d have so much joy
When everyone’s so happy
They’d be able to do so many things
When they have their wings so flappy.
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Reina what a wonderful poem. I particularly enjoyed the feelings I had after reading the first verse!
Reina, Wonderful poem – I loved the way you have clearly stated what you want and made it wonderful for all who come to the place – please note I want to be pixie :) – a naughty one ;)
Message from Ruhaan – “i like it because i love rhyming words and there are many in this poem and i love it.”
Message from Inika – “i would like to tell you that i am a fan of your poems Love your poooooooooooooeeeeeeeeeeeeeemmmmmmmmmmmmssssssssssssssss”
Reina, what lovely thoughts and so beautifully expressed. May you always sit on that throne spreading Joy to all around.
thank you dadi!!!
thanks ruh,DJ and jahnvi aunty!!!
Hi Reina,
very nice poem nothing to improve.
Just…..BOL Reina!
which means….. Best Of Luck Reina
reina your poem is really very creating. GOOD JOB!
Wow Reina! Your very good imagination, even I wish I had a world like that. GOOD JOB!!!!!
from Kabir
Nice Reina.
I liked your imagination.
Hey Reina, what a wonderful poem. And oh how wonderful to have a place where no one is alone :)
I loved you poem!!!!
Beautiful HAPPY thoughts…………….Keep writing more Reina !!!
Lovely Reina:)
Superb Reina
I could imagine your poem
nicely writen
OMG!Awesome poem!!I wish I could live in Dreamland just like you!Plus I’ve read other pieces of your work and they ROCK!!
Keep up the good work!And oh-Could you PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE write more???Never give up Kinooze!And do check out my story and poem,please?Just go to ‘search’ and type ‘Goldie’!
Hope you like them,and awesome poem!
thank you so much will write more!!! it is very sweet of you
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