(Aagam, 9, sees beauty all around him in nature)
Nature is all around us,
Nature is green, red and colorful.
Nature feels like lotus in water, sunflower in sun, birds in air.
Nature makes me calm.Nature is all around us,
Nature is peaceful, dangerous, ferocious
Nature is friendly, caring, adventurous.
Nature makes me forget my worries.
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Hi Aagam!
I loved your poem.
Wonder where u learnt this.
Well I was thinking that u teach me how to right such good poems.
Jst joking. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was great reading how a small boy describes nature!!
Hi Aagam,
You have expressed your feelings very nicely. Keep it up.
Dhruv
thank you ronak kaku
Good poem aagam. Keep it up
good poem aagam
u have great thoughts
u r bright student
keep it up
Helllo aaagam…awsumnn poem..:*:*
In such a small age ur words explore a lot…keep it up :)
Helllo aagam…awsumnn poem.. :*:*
In such a smalll age ur words explore a lot…jus keep it up..!
Such an awsum poem…inspiringg..keep up the good work..bless u aagam..
Good poem, expressive and well written. Keep it up!
Well done, quite an expressive poem, keep it up!
Such a beautiful poem..truely inspiringgg…god bless you aagam..
Great going Aagam Proud of you
Hi Aagam, Your poem is very nice and expressive. It shows how much u are mindful about your surrounding. You have expressed your feeling very well through this poem. KEEP IT UP !!!
Lovely aagam love yor poem;)
Lovely aagam love your imagination, actually reality and poem ;)
Marvelous poem Aagam
Loved your poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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