The perfect dress

The Perfect Dress

(A dreamy story by seven year old Rhea)

Image Credit: Flickr User Liv Clark, via CC

It is my birthday tomorrow. I have been waiting for it all year long. I could not bear the excitement. Till sometime back all I could think was about my birthday party. I wondered “what kind of surprise party will I have? what flavour cake will I have? what gifts will I get?but what I thought the most about was what kind of a dress will I wear?

OH my! I hadnt decided it yet. I dashed and opened my cupboard and started throwing out all the dresses. Fancy dress, jeans, frocks, skirts.

No,no,no,NO NO NO…  I just did not like any of the dresses. So I rejected many more dresses. Finally, at last I took out a classic, shiny, blue mermaid tail dress. And that is when I screamed “THE PERFECT DRESS”. It was just the dress I was dreaming about. But I stopped to think who could have kept it in my cupboard. When I turned around, my mum was standing there with a happy face. I could not wait to hug her.

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2 responses to “The Perfect Dress”

  1. Zeal2000 Avatar

    Really good work Rhea… Well are u from India?

  2. Arusha Avatar

    Hey awesome article Rhae!way to go!!
    Keep writing!
    :) :) :) ;) ;) ;) :D :D :D

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